Preparing a next-edition sponsor renewal proposal using real evidence
A sponsor from this year's event is open to a conversation about next year, and the proposal needs to rest on what actually happened.
The short answer
Build the renewal proposal from three kinds of evidence: what you delivered, what you measured and what the sponsor told you. Show each with its source, state what was not measured, and propose changes that answer the sponsor's own feedback.
Leave out any figure you cannot trace, and do not promise audience, leads or sales. Start from the fulfilment tracker and the debrief notes from the sponsor debrief.
Start with what the sponsor said, not with what you want to sell
Re-read the debrief notes and underline the sponsor's own goal, what they used and what they did not. The proposal should speak to those points in their words.
If the sponsor has not shared a goal, ask before drafting. A proposal built on guesses reads like a standard brochure.
What goes in the proposal
- A short recap of what was delivered, matched to evidence from the tracker, including anything partly delivered and how it was handled.
- Measured counts with source and date, such as registered delegates and scanned attendance, and a plain note on what was not measured.
- The sponsor's own feedback, quoted with permission, including the points that were critical.
- Proposed changes to package, placement or timing, each linked to a point they raised.
- What you would measure next time, and what you need from the sponsor to do it.
- Dates for the decision, with the owner who approves terms. Pricing only as your owner has approved.
What to keep out
- Reach, impressions or return figures that you did not measure or that the sponsor has not shared.
- Claims about what the sponsor will gain next year.
- Comparisons with other sponsors' results or private details of other sponsors.
- Praise from the debrief presented as proof of commercial return. See separating satisfaction from return.
- Anything about next year's programme or venue that is not yet confirmed. Mark it as proposed.
Checking the draft
- Tick each factual statement against a source in the tracker or report.
- Check every number for source, date and definition.
- Ask a colleague who was not at the event to read it and mark anything unclear.
- Have the owner approve terms and wording before it is sent.
- Send it with a proposed time to discuss, not as a take-it-or-leave-it document.
Worked example · Fictional example
A renewal proposal that answers the feedback
Fictional organisation and figures, to illustrate the structure.
A fictional engineering association prepares a renewal proposal for its hall sponsor. The tracker shows six of seven benefits delivered, with the stage slide partly delivered. Registration was 312 and door scans 268. Reach beyond that was not measured, and the proposal says so.
In the debrief, the sponsor said setup access was late and the booth position was far from catering. The proposal offers an earlier setup window, to be confirmed with the venue, and a different booth location, subject to the floor plan. It lists a booth scan the sponsor can use to measure its own conversations.
Use this yourself
Renewal proposal section template
Use these headings in order. Each item needs a source or a note that it is proposed.
- Sponsor, edition and date of proposal:
- What you told us you wanted (the sponsor's goal, in their words):
- What was delivered (benefit by benefit, with evidence):
- What was partly delivered or not delivered, and how it was handled:
- What we measured (count, source, date) and what we did not measure:
- Your feedback, quoted with permission, including critical points:
- Proposed changes and which feedback each answers:
- What to measure next time, and what we need from you:
- Items not yet confirmed (marked as proposed):
- Decision date, owner approving terms, and next step:
Handle it in-house, or bring in help?
Your team can usually handle this when
- You have a few sponsors and delivery records in a tracker.
- The relationship owner can draft and your owner approves terms.
- The sponsor has given clear feedback.
Outside planning help earns its fee when
- Several renewals need consistent, evidence-based proposals in a short window.
- Records are scattered and the evidence has to be assembled first.
- Owner approval of terms needs a clear decision route that does not yet exist.
Want help assembling the evidence and the proposal?
An Event Blueprint can set up the evidence file for each sponsor, the proposal structure, the approval route and the timetable for sending renewals. A project lead can coordinate collecting records and feedback with your secretariat. Your own team keeps the commercial conversation, pricing and any sales.
Questions organisers ask
Can we include the sponsor's feedback in a proposal?
Quote it only with the sponsor's permission, and keep the context. Include critical points as well as praise.
What if we measured very little?
Say so and propose what to measure next time. A short honest proposal serves a renewal better than padded figures.
Should the proposal include a price?
Only as approved by your owner. Otherwise state the proposed package and agree a date for terms.
Related resources
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